Comments on: Maybe Offensive Coordinators Not At Fault http://www.nflrandr.com/2009/10/01/maybe-offensive-coordinators-not-at-fault/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=maybe-offensive-coordinators-not-at-fault Bringing American Football to the World! Tue, 24 Jan 2012 14:15:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: SteveM http://www.nflrandr.com/2009/10/01/maybe-offensive-coordinators-not-at-fault/comment-page-1/#comment-3477 SteveM Fri, 02 Oct 2009 09:54:41 +0000 http://www.nflrandr.com/blog/?p=467#comment-3477 The way I see it is that these men who have made it to play in the NFL have a certain level of talent- they are the best. Now there are a few SICK good players but on the whole everyone who has made an NFL team has to be talented. So we now have 32 teams full of very talented players, with the SICK ones spead around. What seprates the teams now is coaching, how each team and individuals are managed. I sail and am good foredeck man(pointy end of the boat). The crew has worked hard TOGETHER to work as one and if the man responsible for our training, a man we have worked with for months is suddenly not there, we are still very talented individuals and may work well for a time together but it has a very negative effect on the boat/crew. Even if we get the best Skipper in the world to steer the coarse, its not the team that trained together for all those months. Thanks for all your hard work Steven + Jeff (shut up Jeff!!!) the show is so different (better maybe) from the first season- so maybe there is still hope for the Bills, a work in progress --GO BILLS The way I see it is that these men who have made it to play in the NFL have a certain level of talent- they are the best. Now there are a few SICK good players but on the whole everyone who has made an NFL team has to be talented. So we now have 32 teams full of very talented players, with the SICK ones spead around. What seprates the teams now is coaching, how each team and individuals are managed. I sail and am good foredeck man(pointy end of the boat). The crew has worked hard TOGETHER to work as one and if the man responsible for our training, a man we have worked with for months is suddenly not there, we are still very talented individuals and may work well for a time together but it has a very negative effect on the boat/crew. Even if we get the best Skipper in the world to steer the coarse, its not the team that trained together for all those months.

Thanks for all your hard work Steven + Jeff (shut up Jeff!!!) the show is so different (better maybe) from the first season- so maybe there is still hope for the Bills, a work in progress
–GO BILLS

]]> By: Gregory http://www.nflrandr.com/2009/10/01/maybe-offensive-coordinators-not-at-fault/comment-page-1/#comment-3474 Gregory Fri, 02 Oct 2009 04:33:48 +0000 http://www.nflrandr.com/blog/?p=467#comment-3474 Steven: Decent information, and a fabulous premise--that the demise of these teams may have something to do with the firing of OCs so close to the beginning of the regular season--that you let peter out by concluding that their demise could be anything. Hence, as a reader, I'm asking myself, "Why was this written?" If you're not going to put forth an argument, even a poor one (which yours is not) then why write? Indeed, why did I read it? Look, I know you're somewhat new to this, which is why I'm being direct. I'm telling you, Steven, you had a great premise from which you could have build a great article. That's what I hope my comments help you do. In short, don't get wishy-washy when writing. Steven:

Decent information, and a fabulous premise–that the demise of these teams may have something to do with the firing of OCs so close to the beginning of the regular season–that you let peter out by concluding that their demise could be anything. Hence, as a reader, I’m asking myself, “Why was this written?” If you’re not going to put forth an argument, even a poor one (which yours is not) then why write? Indeed, why did I read it?

Look, I know you’re somewhat new to this, which is why I’m being direct. I’m telling you, Steven, you had a great premise from which you could have build a great article. That’s what I hope my comments help you do.

In short, don’t get wishy-washy when writing.

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